Home, It is the place where once we lived and laughed, where we grew up
with the assumption that all would be well, where we met our first
love, where life stretched endlessly ahead - Jack McDevitt
Prompt: A story involving your hometown. Make us believe we’ve been there.
Genre: Open Word Count: 2000 words
Deadline: Thursday, August 11, 2011, 6:30 EST
Though
I wouldn't know the term for another ten or twelve years. It was called lake
effect snow. The ice cold, moisture laden wind coming in off the
southern shore of Lake Erie to dump snow, sometime for days at a time, on my hometown of Avon Lake,
Ohio. Temperatures down in the teens and twenties or lower meant a person out walking was bundled in layers down to long johns and a couple of
pairs of socks over feet stuffed into black rubber galoshes.
Snow, mounded several feet high along the roadsides where the
plows had been piling it since November, made walking a daunting
task. But for kids on Christmas vacation it was usually the only way
of getting around. No bus system in the small town, Fathers drove the
family car into work in Cleveland. Most families didn't have a second
car in those days. If they did often it was an unreliable junker,
another victim of the unrelenting snow and the salted roads.
Prompt: A story involving your hometown. Make us believe we’ve been there.
Genre: Open Word Count: 2000 words
Deadline: Thursday, August 11, 2011, 6:30 EST
Though
I wouldn't know the term for another ten or twelve years. It was called lake
effect snow. The ice cold, moisture laden wind coming in off the
southern shore of Lake Erie to dump snow, sometime for days at a time, on my hometown of Avon Lake,
Ohio. Temperatures down in the teens and twenties or lower meant a person out walking was bundled in layers down to long johns and a couple of
pairs of socks over feet stuffed into black rubber galoshes.
Snow, mounded several feet high along the roadsides where the
plows had been piling it since November, made walking a daunting
task. But for kids on Christmas vacation it was usually the only way
of getting around. No bus system in the small town, Fathers drove the
family car into work in Cleveland. Most families didn't have a second
car in those days. If they did often it was an unreliable junker,
another victim of the unrelenting snow and the salted roads.
My friend Tommy Anderson preferred the winter to the summer. If you
didn't know him Tommy seemed sort of a weakling, small and thin for
his age with glasses and in summer a constant sniffle. In the years
before central air was common, along with the summer heat came hay fever; an allergic reaction to the ragweed and goldenrod pollen found in staggering
amounts around the Great Lakes. Hay Fever would often keep Tommy
stuck in the house out of the sunshine with his sinus' completely
congested; often with his eyes stuck closed in the mornings until
he could get some cold water splashed onto his face. Summer was
miserable for Tommy. He couldn't wait for that first freeze of the
season usually early in October. By the end of November, the town was
blanketed in snow and the temperatures were steadily below
freezing. For Tommy that meant the ice rink was ready.
Avon
Lake in the mid 60's was a pleasant, orderly place to live. There was a shopping
district that consisted of two grocery stores and a Ben Franklin's
five and dime, a hotel, a bowling alley, a movie theater and a gas
station. That was all on the west side of town between Lake Road and
Electric Blvd close to the power plant. Tommy lived closer to the
center of town. Here was where the town
had put the municipal buildings, the police and fire stations, the municipal pool, tennis courts, the Little League park,
and the ice rink.
During
Christmas vacation Tommy was down at the rink early every morning,
often he would be the first person there. Then he could skate as fast as he
wanted and he always wanted to go faster, and faster. He could care less
about figure skating. That was for girls, hockey was for boys. Skate fast,
use the stick well and stop and turn without falling. That was all
the skill you needed. Of course it's hockey, you couldn't be afraid to hit
somebody. Hit them hard, knock'em on their butt.
Pads? Those kids growing up in the 60's in Avon Lake. They didn't need
no stinkin' pads! Or helmets or any of that other “wuss” stuff.
Hockey skates, A stick and an attitude. Tommy had that in spades and
it didn't really matter the sport. Baseball; expect the hard slide when Tommy came barreling into home plate. Football, Same as hockey; just hit
somebody.
Tommy and I had been going to school together since second grade. We liked a lot of the same things, comics, sports and science fiction. We had many friends on the streets between our houses; and one nemesis-Tad Burey, the neighborhood bully, Older, bigger and mean tempered. Tad ruled the neighborhood with a lizard-like presence. If there two or more kids out. Burey was nowhere to be seen but if you were out alone, Burey would come slinking out of nowhere to knock you down or push your face into the snow or mud. Yeah, like that, a tough guy when no one else was around. Tommy and I had both been his victims since second grade. I just avoided him when I could and took it when I couldn't avoid him. Tommy tried to stand up to him and he was determined to pay him back.
Christmas, I think it was 1965, Tommy got new skates, his
old ones just weren't big enough anymore. Though his new skates were
someone else's old skates it wasn't important to Tommy.
He was just as proud of them as would have been of a pair right out
of the Montgomery Ward catalog. The day after Christmas I was going to
be visiting my cousins. It looked as if it was going to be a good
day. It had started out fine for Tom. He got to the ice rink about
8:30. The new skates worked great. I don't know if Tommy was actually
faster on them but when he told me this he sure was excited about how fast
he was. For two hours he skated his heart out. Back and forth
up the ice against imaginary defense men, flipping the puck back and
forth, the stick moving from hand to hand like it was a part of him.
Tommy seemed to be born for this.Tommy and I had been going to school together since second grade. We liked a lot of the same things, comics, sports and science fiction. We had many friends on the streets between our houses; and one nemesis-Tad Burey, the neighborhood bully, Older, bigger and mean tempered. Tad ruled the neighborhood with a lizard-like presence. If there two or more kids out. Burey was nowhere to be seen but if you were out alone, Burey would come slinking out of nowhere to knock you down or push your face into the snow or mud. Yeah, like that, a tough guy when no one else was around. Tommy and I had both been his victims since second grade. I just avoided him when I could and took it when I couldn't avoid him. Tommy tried to stand up to him and he was determined to pay him back.
Then
the snow began to fall again. Like everyone else Tommy wandered
inside for hot chocolate, to take off the skates and put his galoshes
on for the two block walk to the library. Once there he placed his
skates and galoshes out of the way in the lobby coat room, he found a
book of short SF stories, his usual comfortable chair
unoccupied and soon the words of Sturgeon and Simak carried his
imagination into realms few had visited, realms abound with aliens civilizations, robots and spaceships.
Tommy
finally noticed it was getting dark. Close to 3PM, in a northern Ohio
winter sunset wasn't that far off. As he stepped outside, a cold
blast of air, filled with wind whipped snow forced it's way down the
back of Tommy's neck as if the cap and scarf weren't even there. The
temperature had dropped by fifteen or twenty degrees he guessed.
Below zero anyway. With that harsh wind coming off the lake and the
snow falling heavier than it had earlier in the winter Tommy began
the long march home. Past the High School he was sheltered for a bit
but his wet socks were starting to freeze as were his ears. He
carried a stack of books in his left hand and his skates tied together and safely
over his right shoulder banged him on the right hip at every step.
Now
past the Congregational Church across from the municipal center where
he had started from he was able to take a short cut through the woods. That path would lead
right to his house. It was a frequently used highway for most of the kids in the neighborhood. Halfway home Tommy felt frozen solid, His feet and face were numb, all he could think of was putting one foot in front of the other. The snow was coming hard now. Visibility was practically nothing, Tommy plodded on. Then wham! A snowball to the back of the head followed by a push that knocked him to the ground. he looked up, standing over him with that insolent lizard like grin was Tad Burey. What he was doing out in that weather was anyone's guess but he had picked the wrong time.
Maybe it was the cold wind and snow off the lake or maybe Tommy, just being Tommy, was fed up with Burey. I wish I had been there to see.
Maybe it was the cold wind and snow off the lake or maybe Tommy, just being Tommy, was fed up with Burey. I wish I had been there to see.
“What
you got there Anderson” Tommy Climbed to his feet picking up his books as he did so.
“Books
from the Library”
“Lemme
see 'em”
Tommy
handed the books over.
“You
read this stuff” What is it, Rocket ships and space junk”
“Yeah”. Tommy let the skates slip off his shoulder into his right hand where they gently dangled slowly picking up speed.
Burey paging through one then dropped them into a small snowbank. He finally noticed the skates
“Nice
Skates, give 'em here”
“No”
“Did
you say no, punk”!
“You
can't have them”
“This
is your last warning, Anderson! Give 'em here!
Tommy started spinning the heavy skates with the newly sharpened blades faster!
“You
want' em Burey, you're going to have to take them”
Burey lunged for them but by now the skates were a blur. They caught him on the shoulder as he ducked backwards out of their deadly rotation. Protected by the layers of clothing he wasn't seriously hurt though it made him re-think his actions Tommy took the chance to retrieve his books, the skates never stopped moving.
"Just leave me alone Tad. I will hit you if you get closer!"
Burey lunged for them but by now the skates were a blur. They caught him on the shoulder as he ducked backwards out of their deadly rotation. Protected by the layers of clothing he wasn't seriously hurt though it made him re-think his actions Tommy took the chance to retrieve his books, the skates never stopped moving.
"Just leave me alone Tad. I will hit you if you get closer!"
Tommy walked
past him still spinning the skates. Burey skittered out of the way. Re-energized after his encounter Tommy was home a few minutes later thawing in front of the radiator.
Neither he nor I saw Burey again that winter. But we knew we weren't
done with him...

I grew up in Erie, Pa. I know lake effect snow. I once lost my glasses in a snow back in front of my house. I didn't find them until April. I also had a local bully like this one. I'd had enough and nailed him one. He was caught completely by surprise, but no one was more surprised than I was! I never had trouble with him again. But the snow, well, it came back every November.
ReplyDeleteThat seems to be the way with Bullies. I had minor trouble with Burey over the next couple of years. but that's another story. Thanks Jim.
ReplyDeleteBTW, it's a good story, too!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jim
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I had the height thing going for me as a kid but I still had issues with bullies. Try as I might to understand a bully's need to oppress and terrorize small kids because he feels inadequate in some way to me its a bizarre behavior. Then again, I don't understand much about human nature.
ReplyDeleteOnce again great story Mike, would have gotten here sooner but work was a pain all week and my wife is right in the middle of one of her eBay selling blitzes so she owns the computer more or less.
Glad you enjoyed it Ron. Maybe because I was so thin and was always the new kid, 13 public schools in 12 years, At every school there seemed to be someone who wanted to mess with me. Where I got even was PE. I was good athlete, and not afraid to hit someone. Through Jr High and high school that was tremendous. Plus my brother and I ran together most of the time so I was seldom alone.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Mike... very well told... I could almost feel the cold! I love the snow... hate the cold... can probably take northern Ohio off my list of places to live.
ReplyDeleteIt only takes one time to stand up to a bully... suddenly they aren't as big or scary as they first appeared. I was always small in school (still am, only 5'3"), but after standing up to a couple... had no more troubles.
Very good read... thank you for sharing.
Thanks Veroica, glad you enjoyed it. I ve' only spent maybe 4 days in Ohio since I moved out 45 years ago. Give me sunshine and a beach anytime.
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